On writing: A memoir of the craft/ Stephen King

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ISBN: 034076998X

“What follows is an attempt to put down, briefly and simply, how I came to the craft, what I know about it now, and how it’s done. It’s about the day job; it’s about the language.” (p. ix).

Stephen King approaches writing like a word play, where he lets his unconscious (rather than consciously) develop characters. And he doesn’t believe in developing plots as much as developing characters in situations.

P17. As a child, he copied and slightly embellished the words fro comic books. His remembers his mother asking if the stories were original (he admitted they were not) and said he should write “one of your own”.

P33. He kept mostly science fiction books.

P34. His habit of saving his rejection slips on a nail spike, until there were too many. That was only up to sixteen years old, which meant he’d submitted and continued practicing during his teens.

BTW, that para is a lesson in making writing interesting (“write, not describe”). He could’ve written that he received many rejection slips but persevered. Instead he wrote: “By the time I was fourteen… the nail on the wall will no longer support the weight of all the rejection slips impaled upon it. I replaced the nail with a spike and went on writing.”

And P37. Instead of listing Dave’s (his older brother) passion and hobbies, he wrote from his perspective: “I wasn’t interested in the printing process, and I wasn’t interested at all in the arcana of first developing and then reproducing photographs. I didn’t care about putting Hearst shifters in cars, making cider… What I cared about most between 1958 and 1966 was movies.”

P45/ 46. Selling his story in grade school (albeit plagarised unknowingly) sold en mass. And a teacher admonishing him for writing “trash” and leaving an indelible mark and self-doubt for years.

P56. Editorial advice he received from his first paid assignment as a student reporter: “When you write a story, you’re telling yourself the story… When you rewrite, your main job is taking out all the things that are not the story.”

(between P56 to 112). Early family life, struggles, his sale of Carrie, acknowledgement and dealing with alcoholism and drug abuse, death of his mother.

P112. “… Put your desk in the corner, and every time you sit down there to write, remind yourself why it isn’t in the middle of the room. Life isn’t a support-system for art. It’s the other way around.”

P114. “Books are a uniquely portable magic”.

P118. Feels that if we want to be writers, don’t take writing lightly.

P125. His version of a writer’s toolbox:
1. Vocabulary. But write concise and appropriately; don’t use vocabulary merely to dress up.

2. Grammar.
P133. Good grammar is the foundation of good writing.

P134. place a noun with a verb and you always have a sentence (whether it makes sense is another thing): “rocks explode”, “mountains float”, “plums deify”.

P134. His pet peeve is passive tense: “The meeting will be held at seven o’clock” (passive tense) Vs. “The meeting starts at seven” (active tense).
P145. “With a hammer he killed Frank” Vs. “He killed Frank with a hammer” (see the emphasis on the hammer Vs. the person).

Suggests to have Skrunk and White on hand.

P145. Use “s” even if word ends with “s”: “Thomas’s bike” Vs. “Thomas’ bike”.

P164. To be a good writer, above all else, “read a lot and write a lot”.
P178. “one word at a time”.
180. “don’t wait for the muse”.

He reads about 70 novels a year. Not analyse them per se but because he enjoys reading. Also learns what is good and bad writing.

His routine is 2,000 words a day (about 10 pages) unfailingly. Keeps writing on current theme to keep the characters fresh.

P171. “The more you read, the less apt you are to make a fool of yourself with your pen or word processor.”

P182. On what to write: “Anything at all… as long as you tell the truth.”

P182. “… The job of fiction is to find the truth inside the story’s web of lies…”

P185. Writing about what we know and like: “write what you like, then imbue it with life and make it unique by blending in your personal knowledge of life, friendship, relationships, sex and work. Especially work. People love to read about work.” (e.g. John Grisham’s The Firm) suggests a plumber who enjoys Scifi might consider a novel about a plumber abroad a starship or on an alien planet. Recommends Clifford D. Simak’s Cosmic Engineers. And don’t lecture on what you know; use it to enrich your story.

P188. He believes that stories make themselves, i.e. Minimal predetermined plot and letting the story develop. That the writer’s role is to use their writing tools and techniques to uncover buried stories as intact as possible (paraphrase: “undiscovered relics of a pre-existing world” — hmm, one can say the same of music too, I suppose).

P189. Narration (moving the story); Description (creating a sensory reality for the reader); Dialogue (giving characters life through their speech). Plot, to King, is a writer’s later resort.

P190 – P195. Described himself as writing about “situations” rather than plots. Explains how he developed/ wrote Misery (or let the story develop itself).

P255. “is this story coherent?” and “what will turn coherence into a song? What are the recurring elements? Do they entwine and make a theme?”

P255. He looks for ‘resonance’: the thing that will linger in the reader’s mind and heart at the end of the story.

P256-263. His approach to getting his books reviewed (he prefers friends and critics he knows). Basically, the principle seems to be ‘listen to what the majority says’ and ‘author decides if decision is split’.

P266. Rule of 2nd Draft = 1st Draft less 10%.

P270. Praises J. K. Rowling’s Harry Potter novels as good way of weaving in “back stories”, as well as being “fun”.

P273. Background remains in the ‘back’. Warns against self-indulgence in writing.

P278. King doesn’t believe, and admits a bias against, writing courses and seminars. Critiques are vague and he suggests writing a first draft should be just the author and the imaginary Ideal Reader, and not the whole world forcing you to second guess or interrupt the initial ideas.

P301. He states that he has never written a story for the money but for the buzz he derives from writing. “… if you can do it for joy, you can so it forever.”

P305 – 327. He writes a blow-by-blow account of his accident, of meeting the errant driver, being sent for emergency treatment, almost losing his life, the painful recuperation, and how he managed to pick up writing again.

P326. “Writing isn’t about making money, getting famous, getting dates, getting laid, or making friends. In the end it’s about enriching the lives of those who will read your work, and enriching your own life, as well.”

P336. He explains his editorial changes using an actual story he was writing.

P347. What he considers as books that have entertained him.

Ends with a short story he chose as the winner of a writing competition — “Jumper” by Garrett Addams.

Dragon Outcast (Age of Fire, Book 3)/ E. E. Knight

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ISBN: 0451461851

Following the same treatment in Book 2, we learn of the chain of events from the perspective of the Copper dragon.

In Book 1, I got the impression the copper dragon, crippled in the birthing fight, maliciously led the dwarves to murder his parents and siblings. In this book, we learn that he was also tortured and tricked by the dwarves.

After several sequence of events, he and a bunch of blood-drinking bats end up at the Lavadome, with the Copper later being adopted into a royal family of dragons. He’s named Rugaard and assigned to the Drakwatch (kind of like National Service). He learns of the value of being tenacious, and that intelligence can more than make up for pure brawn. Distinguishes himself with his steadfastness in a battle.

Gradually, he finds himself drawn into the political maneuverings and manipulations within the royal line. A civil war develops. RuGaard manages to turn the tide against the numerically superior dragons by employing the help of the bats.

The Dragonblade makes his appearance yet again. Ironically, it’s RuGaard — the crippled dragon — that manages to kill the Dragonblade, and ultimately avenge their family.

Dragon Avenger (Age of Fire, Book 2)/ E. E. Knight

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ISBN: 0451461096

Told from the perspective of AuRon’s sister Wistala the Green.

Common thread starts from the time they were born in the cave, to Wistala witnessing the birthing battles among her brothers, to the murder of her mother and other sister. And Wistala escaping with Auron.

After that, their paths diverge.

Wistala finds their father, who appears to be mortally wounded. But Wistala manages to nurse him to health, only to lose him in a final desperate battle with the Dragon-killer, a man called Dragonblade.

She manages to escape once again. Ends up fighting a troll (not the sort of troll that I might have imagined) and then adopted as the daughter of an Elf named Rainfall. Even becomes a librarian!

Part of Wistala’s education was to join a traveling circus. Learns how to pretend to read fortunes.

Eventually, she infiltrates the dwarves (led by the one who murdered her parents), manages to deceive them from her true intent, and she gets her revenge.

End part: she meets Dragonblade and his son (we’re introduced to the boy, Eliam, in Book 1); was also the cause of Eliam’s injury.

Dragon Champion (Age of Fire, Book 1)/ E. E. Knight

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Decided to read this because I enjoyed this earlier book by the same author.

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ISBN: 0451460472

Fantasy novel centering on a young dragon, Auron (or AuRon, after dragons unfurl their wings), and his coming of age.

Auron is a Grey (i.e. un-amoured scales scale-less). Survives initial birthing ritual.

Family is killed by hostile dwarfs. Two surviving sisters (one of them, Wistala, goes on to book 2 while the other sister is killed; the crippled unnamed Copper has his own story in Book 3).

Auron is captured and sold. Learns of a book written about the secret of dragons and also an old dragon, NooMoahk, and seeks him out. Midway he escapes. Survives by his wits.

Outwits a drake on an island and devises a way to have the humans kill the drake (but as a dragon, his view of humans are like how we see lab rats. Auron remorsefully kills a child just to accomplish the deed).

Meets up with a dwarf. Enters into a partnership to escort the goods.

Eventually finds NooMoahk. Also has a human baby companion.

Through NooMoahk’s library, Auron learns the languages and histories of man and various species (elves, dwarves).

Wings are unfurled (in E. E. Knight’s world, dragons are wingless drakes before growing their wings). Forced to leave after NooMoahk goes berserk.

Finds a band of humans who have domesticated dragons. Apparently the ultimate cause of his family’s death. Infiltrates them. Abides his time. Meets Eliam, a sadistic lieutenant (linked to book 2 and 3).

Schemes and eventually wins the freedom of all the dragons in the stronghold.

BTW, what’s interesting is the author’s notion of dragons and gold (and other precious metals). In Knight’s world, dragons lust after gold and metals because they eat metal to strengthen and develop amoured scales. And they are able to produce fire by spitting a sort of bile that ignites upon contact with air.

Valentine’s Resolve (Vampire Earth, Book 6)/ E.E. Knight

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ISBN: 9780451462190

My first encounter with this series.

Like it for several reasons:

  • It’s a well thought-out amalgamation of Fantasy (i.e. Vampires) with Military Scifi.
  • Believable plot
  • Picking this series, without starting with the first, still gave me enough background and context that I could follow the preceding plot easily. And the author didn’t get into a re-hash of what went on before. All that came in context along the way.
  • The military/ fire-fight scenes were part of the plot development, rather than being presented for the sake of action.
  • Realistic battles and use of modern weaponry. Yet there’s the fantastic element, like several classes of enhanced super-soldiers called “Cats”, “Wolves” and “Bears”. Over the development of the story, I slowly got a sense of what they were. Which was much better than if I were told outright (would’ve lost all elements of discovery for this reader!)

It’s 50 years after the 2022 takeover of Earth by the Kurian Order. Valentine undertakes a mission. Along the way, he joins up with two resistance forces. One of which was the band led by a mysterious Adler, who turns out to be a (oops, plot-spoiler!)

Apparently the Kurian Lords controlled alien creatures like Grogs, Big Mouths and the dreaded Reapers (i.e. Vampire-like super creatures mentally controlled by Kurian Lords). That’s how they controlled the human population.

The ‘Good Vs. Evil’ aspect of Kurian Lords Vs. Lifeweavers wasn’t too cliche. Though at the back of my mind, I wondered if this “balance” was a bit too convenient. And also how wooden bullets could be fashioned out of “Quickwood”, which was the only effective ammunition that could kill a Reaper. But it was just a minor thought and actually they served to provide some familiarity to an otherwise fantastic plot.

Found this site that tells more about the series: wapedia.mobi/en/Vampire_Earth.

Fables, Vol. 11: War and Pieces/ Bill Willingham & Mark Buckingham

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ISBN: 9781401219130

Issues 70 to 75.

Dramatic conclusion, culminating in the Final Battle between Fabletown and the rulers of the Homelands.

Fabletown goes on an offensive that takes the Adversary and his forces by utter surprise. Cinderella rescuing Pinocchio; Sinbad, Prince Charming, an airship and a hybrid “guided bomb”; Boy Blue and Bigby gets nicked by a magic arrow; Bigby battles the puppet Emperor; the end (?)

Afterword by Bill Willingham: talks about a Fairytale Road in Germany, and how he drew inspiration for Fables from there.

Fables Vol. 9: Sons of Empire/ Bill Willingham, James Jean, Mike Allred & Joelle Jones

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ISBN: 9781401213169

Issues 52 to 59.

Following the pre-emptive strike by Bigby at the magic grove, the Adversary calls for a war council to plan on how to deal with Fabletown and the mundanes.

Side stories: the Three Blind Mice; an attempt to steal the list of “who’s been good and bad” from Father Christmas (and a few more).

Part one of “Father and Son”: detailing the stormy relationship between Bigby Wolf and his father, the North Wind. Bigby brings Snow and the kids for a short stay with his father. The kids/ cubs get into trouble (minor plot-giveway: it’s Bigby’s brothers!)

Fables Vol. 8: Wolves/ Bill Willingham, Mark Buckhingham & Shawn McManus

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ISBN: 9781401210014

Issues 48 to 51.

Mowgli seeks out Bigby, who’s gone into self-imposed seclusion. Snow White and the cubs grow up. Bigby comes back and is sent on a daring black ops retaliatory strike right at The Adversary. Comes back alive. Reunited with Snow and the kids. They get married.

Cinderella (spy, special ops, assassin) goes through all sorts of ways to get the Cloud Kingdoms to sign a treaty with Fabletown.

This compilation has a map of Fabletown.

Also includes the script for issue 50 (excellent resource for those who want to learn about writing for graphic novels).

Fables Vol. 1: Legends in Exile/ Bill Willingham & Lan Medina

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ISBN: 9781563899423

Collection of issues one to five.

We’re introduced to characters like Bigby Wolf (reformed terror; skilled in war and now working as a detective), Snow White (mayor of Fabletown), Prince Charming (a cad and cheat of women), Rose Red (Snow White’s wilful sister), Jack of the Beanstalk fame (a dreamer and bum in this series).

Bigby has to solve the disappearance, and apparent murder, of Rose Red. Jack is the prime suspect, along with Blue Beard and even Snow White. Nearer the end, we’re also told of how the Fables came to be refugees (the Emperor in their original medieval-like story land seeks to conquer them all with his army). In the end, Bigby solves the mystery (minor spoiler: no one’s dead, and the whole ruse had to do with marriage contract). Hint of Bigby and Snow’s romance.

An additional short story, “A wolf in the fold”. An alternate-history, if you will, of about how Bigby Wolf (Big Bad Wolf) met Snow White, escaping from the Emperor/ the Adversary.

Very good stuff.

Analog science fiction and fact/ May 2009

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p4. Editorial by Stanley Schmidt, on “Noisy Signals”. About US political campaigns being typically less about issues or what candidates intend to do about them, and more about mudslinging and allegations about candidates’ character and misdeeds. “The one thing we can count is that one of the candidates will be elected, and will then do things that affect the rest of us. So it’s to our advantage to make our best efforts to pick the one who will do the best job–or at least the least damage.” He suggests a few ways to separate the noise from the signal, e.g. looking at recent past voting record of candidates. Concludes that even if one can not get a “clean signal”, we have to make our best efforts and extract as much information as we can. “There’s too much at stake to give up because it isn’t easy”.

p23. “Geology, geohistory, and “Psychohistory”: The (continuing) debate between Uniformitarians and Catastrophists” by Richard A. Lovett. Fact article, pointing out a geological debate between Uniformitarians who argue that geological processes occur slowly over “deep time” Vs. the Catastrophists who propose that there are geological processes that come as a result of single catastrophes. Cited the story of J Harlen Bretz.

Suggests why the “catastrophic” view was not accepted; at p24:

“Uniformitarianism was to make the science respectable compared to physics,” Baker says. Physicists can perform lab experiments. Geologists don’t have that luxury. “So people thought you needed a principle, to ground the science in something strong.”
Soennichsen thinks it stemmed from a deep-set inferiority complex. “[Geologists] weren’t guys in lab coats with test tubes–you were chipping away at rocks, which a five-year-old can do. The inferiority complex led them to latch onto this fundamental principle.”

p48. “Rendezvous at Angles Thirty” by Tom Ligon. A WWII American Mustang air mission is recreated. Realistic and credible description of the air battle, I thought.

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